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Belzebubbles wrote:čak i ako je kraj povezan sa ostatkom priče, tj. nije silom ubačeno, nego ima smisla?
ako je izjavna rečenica u navodnicima, basically da.
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
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Daklem, na radionicu su stigle tri priče. Dvije su postan ovdje, pa slobodno krenite s komenatarima. A treću koja nije poštovala zadatak će autor sam staviti u čiču miču ako tako odluči.
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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Taj zabludjeli bih bio ja...
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