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LR 23

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Daklem, vidim da se traži novi krug. So here it is:

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- ili first contact ili razviti Clarkovu ideju (http://nosf.net/magazin/natjecaj-clarke/)
- 10 dana

Izjasnite se! :kava:
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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Nitko se ne izjašnjava...
...ALI, ALI - neki su sutori prihvatili izazov i poslali mi priČe. (Bravo! :uzdravlje:)
Ergo, propozocije stoje. :kava:

Pišite!
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English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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Prošlo je mjesec dana - jeste li spremni na novi krug? :kava:
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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Nimrod wrote:Prošlo je mjesec dana - jeste li spremni na novi krug? :kava:

Može! :cheers:
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nova sam ali i za :)
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Nimrod wrote:Prošlo je mjesec dana - jeste li spremni na novi krug? :kava:
:x Hajde sada nemoj razvlačiti. Čekam već 15 dana. :x
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ok, ok, samo moram smislit nešto... :dum:
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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Nimrod wrote:ok, ok, samo moram smislit nešto... :dum:
Hajde dok smišljaš pokušajte mi nešto razjasniti. Da li je potrebno u pričama, novelama itd. pojasniti šta je npr. hyperspace, antigravitacija i sl. ?
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Re: LR 23

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po meni ne.
po meni se objašnjavaju samo pojmovi/nazivi koje si eventualno sam izmislio pa da čitatelj zna što je to.
npr. I onda je ona uzela čaromalju - malu kutiju u kojoj... bla-bla ...
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Čak ni to. Razlika između dobrog i lošeg pisanja SF-a (jedna od...) je u tome da čak i stvari koje si potpuno izmislio ne objašnjavaš, nego ostaviš da se shvate iz konteksta. Ako je liku i u društvu o kojemu pišeš jasno što je to "kurburzgud", onda objašnjavanje čitatelja izbacuje iz ritma i stvara osjećaj patroniziranja. Naravno, postoje izuzeci, ali, generalno, infodumpove treba ostaviti za romane iznad 200 kartica.
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What Izitpajn says. A mcn na to obično dodaje da ne valja koristiti stvari vezane uz filmove i serije jer osim što to to pokazuje lijenost i nemaštovitost pisca (mislim da su bila ova dva pridjeva), čitatelj možda nije gleda seriju ili film pa neće ni poloviti sve implikacije. (tipa stormtrooper, fazor, Klingonci, itd)
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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