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LJUBAV

Ana i Mario ljubili su se strasno na debelom tepihu pored toplog kamina. Mario pomiluje Anine bradavice, pa joj posegne između nogu, osjeti vlagu, prodre prstom, primakne kukove. Ana se prepusti. Mario uvede ud u nju. Ovako spojenima, Ani je bilo lakše da svoj ud uvede u Marija. Marijo tada prodre trbušnim penisima u Anine trbušne vagine. Ana uzvrati. Ostale vagine na prsima, ramenima, glavi, otvoriše se i čudno spojiše sa odgovarajućim penisima. Ana i Mario se posve izgube u potpunom predavanju jedno drugome ...
Tri dana kasnije Anamario se probudi pored sad ugaslog kamina. Još nespretan, krene u kupaonicu.
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malo previ??e pimpaÄ?a za moj ukus :lol:

nije mi ba?? jasno ??to je pisac htio reći :scratch:

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Fora mi je!
Pretpostavljam da ti silni pimpaci i vagine otezavaju normalan zivot, jer ako si hodajuca genitalija tesko je naci vremena i interesa za bilo sto drugo osim za valjanje pred kaminom?
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puno neshvaćenih prič?a u LR13 pa tako i ova
sve ovo dajem generaciji u dešperaciji!
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Uuuu... perverz mu??araf SF...
provokacijon plas porn plas loc of penisiz,
Podsjeća me na ono kad sam u "malo humora" plesnuo porno minijaturu "Trxmosis nije posve u??ivao u sno??aju" a Ire i Aranel vrisnule...

So... mi lajkit... :mrgreen:
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Netko ima pozamasnu kolekciju Hentaia doma :lol:
Sex sells, pogotovo kad sam sa sobom mozes napraviti grupnjak. Japanci bi kupili prava za ovo samo tako! :jerk:
No, ovako djeluje nekako klinicki. Ako si zelio napisati erotsku pricu ili pornografiju, mozda bi mogao upotrijebiti druge rijeci umjesto penisa i vagine. Bar je nas jezik plodan na tom polju!
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Za mene je ovo previ??e... :oops: :!: :shock: Uva??avam tebe i tvoju ideju,ali... :dontknow:
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Meni je ovo dobro :) Lijepo sfiÄ?no, s lepom primjesom romantike, ak gleda?? metaforiÄ?ki. I sviđa mi se punchline ideja. Malo je bolesno sveukupno, though :?
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Odliccno.

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prebolesno :shock:

sviđa :D :mrgreen:
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