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Unread post by Indigo Montoya » 22 Apr 2004, 20:53

L.Z. wrote:Mislim nije da se bunim
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Unread post by Kris » 26 Apr 2004, 08:02

Eto, neke priče su stigle, ostale očekujemo :). Kako će stizati tako ću ih stavljati na LR.
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by L.Z. » 01 May 2004, 21:41

Šta ćemo dalje :?:
Život je samo san na putu do smrti

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Unread post by Klara » 01 May 2004, 21:57

Ja imam osje?aj da bi ina Krisova prvoaprilska [?]ala ovaj mjesec pro[?]la bez komentara.
Žao mi je [?]to se vi[?]e nikome ne da pisati i komentirati. :(

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Unread post by L.Z. » 02 May 2004, 19:18

ja stvarno nisam imao vremena, ali budem komentirao
Život je samo san na putu do smrti

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Unread post by Kris » 03 May 2004, 08:05

Komentirat cu, ali nemam vremena disati. Katastrofa. Ali budem. Jedino ne znam hocu li ista napisati (a bojim se da necu). A uskoro bi trebao krenuti i sljedeci krug LR :P
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by Kris » 05 May 2004, 14:17

Ok ljudi, ajmo se malo razbuditi. Molim prijedloge za sljedecu LR, teme ili neku drugu ideju.

Ire i Nimrod, gdje je prica? ;)

Ja cu ili nesto napisati u sljedecih dan-dva, ili nista za ovu LR ako ne stignem.

Pokrenimo se malo...
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by L.Z. » 05 May 2004, 20:01

Kris wrote:Ok ljudi, ajmo se malo razbuditi. Molim prijedloge za sljedecu LR, teme ili neku drugu ideju.

Ire i Nimrod, gdje je prica? ;)

Ja cu ili nesto napisati u sljedecih dan-dva, ili nista za ovu LR ako ne stignem.

Pokrenimo se malo...
Tako treba, ajmo se počet dogovarat za sljedeći krug a za ovaj krug ko pošalje pošalje
Život je samo san na putu do smrti

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Unread post by Ire » 05 May 2004, 21:44

Ire i Nimrod, gdje je prica?
:violent3: ubi me al ne stignem.. :?
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Unread post by Kris » 10 May 2004, 15:17

Ajde da se pokusamo malo oziviti. Ima li tko kakav prijedlog za sljedeci krug LR? Posto izgleda da je ovaj vise-manje neslavno propao uz casne izuzetke Klaru i Indiga...
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by Indigo Montoya » 10 May 2004, 17:08

Meni se svi?alo kada ste ono u startu zadavali samo obavezne elemente pri?e a ostatak prepuštali nama (ja doduše nisam tada još bijo ?lan foruma :( ) mislim da bi takav pristup urodio brojnim i ukusnim plodovima jer bi sve radove na odre?en na?in držao u tajedni?kom situ a ipak nebi djelovao onako usko ograni?avaju?e kao kad zadate: i žanr i atmosferu pri?e, obli?je i porijeklo glavnog lika i njegovu motivaciju i krakter.
Osobno mislim da je jedan od originalnijih prijedloga koji nikada nije došao u obzir onaj :
a) doga?a se na Bra?u po zimi
b) glavni lik zove se Bepo
c) cyberpunk
d) za radnju je važna ukosnica
Ja sam na samu ideju o cyberpunku na Bra?u pa još zimi po jugu i burama odvalijo totalka 8-)
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Unread post by Nimrod » 11 May 2004, 09:58

Vidiš, i meni je to bilo super, ali svi su bas taj prijedlog njaviše ignorirali. :dontknow:
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Unread post by Ire » 11 May 2004, 10:56

pošto nikad nisam bila na bra?u, a pogotovo ne zimi, meni bi bilo teško pisati o bra?u po zimi.. možda je bolje da se onda stavi 'bilokoji hrvatski otok po zimi'..
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Unread post by Indigo Montoya » 11 May 2004, 11:00

varijacija osnovne ideje i mislim da je skroz prihvatljiva
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