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Unread post by Kris » 24 May 2004, 08:54

Opet odgode... 8-)

Može. Iako sam ja napisao priču i kakva god da je stavit ću je danas, a vi ostale onda postajte kako stižu.
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by Klara » 24 May 2004, 12:30

OK, ja nisam moju pri?u stigla zavr[?]iti. Postat ?u je kada stignem. :dontknow:

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Unread post by Kris » 25 May 2004, 11:05

Vidim da smo se naveliko potrgali za ovaj krug LR :(


Ajde malo života! :blob:
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by L.Z. » 25 May 2004, 20:49

Ej, zar nećeš staviti priče iz prošle radionice u poseban topic.
Život je samo san na putu do smrti

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Unread post by Kris » 26 May 2004, 10:00

Stavio sam. Suncev vjetar i Ljubomora nisu bili u sklopu LR pa sam ih ostavio kao posebne price. Nakon nekog vremena cu ih prebaciti u literarni kutak.
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by Indigo Montoya » 31 May 2004, 09:19

Imam ideju, imam ideju...

Pade mi napamet doka sam postao svoj odgovor na nekom drugom threadu NOSFa...

Ergo vele ljudi da je mladi Orson traže?i lovu za snimanje jednom uvalio porducentima spiku o gotovom filmu za koji u stvari nije imao ni scenarij ni glumce ali je zato imao vraški dobar naslov koji je nagnao producente da odriješe kesu (nešto je doduše išlo i na dušu njegove poslovi?ne blagoglagoljivosti naravno)...

Pitam se dakle jeste li se ikada našli u tako zanimljivoj situaciji?
Da vam je u glavi odnekud iz ?ista mira i ni?im izazvan iskrsao naslov, tako zgodan, dobar, uzbudljiv i intrigantan da je jednostavno vapio za time da se na njega nakalemi jednako zgodna, dobra, uzbudljiva i intrigantna pri?a?

A što mislite da se naš slijede?i zadatak u L.R. koncipira upravo na takav na?in?

Da Kris iz svog snijegovima Kilimandžara obavijenog hipotalamusa izvu?e nekakav zgodan naslov i onda mi oko njega ipredemo svoje pri?ice?

Aj baš da vas ?ujem...

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Unread post by Kris » 31 May 2004, 09:24

Može, super prijedlog!

E sad ja samo moram smisliti naslov :x

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You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by MadDog » 31 May 2004, 11:17

Kris wrote:MoĹže, super prijedlog!

E sad ja samo moram smisliti naslov :x

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Hmmm... jel' se to meni samo ?ini ili su tako bile koncipirane i 1. i 2. LR?
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Unread post by Kris » 31 May 2004, 12:29

Više-manje da.

Ali prve LR su imale i najveći odjek i najviše poslanih priča ;)
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by Klara » 31 May 2004, 17:51

Ĺ to se ti?e naslova - mogli bi poslati ideje Krisu privatnim porukama (da bude iznena?enje) pa da on odabere...
Ali prve LR su imale i najve?i odjek i najvi[?]e poslanih pri?a
Da, i vi[?]e komentara. Po meni radionica nema smisla ako pri?e na dobiju kreativne komentare :? .

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Unread post by Kris » 01 Jun 2004, 10:07

Klara wrote:Što se ti?e naslova - mogli bi poslati ideje Krisu privatnim porukama (da bude iznena?enje) pa da on odabere...
Ali prve LR su imale i najve?i odjek i najviše poslanih pri?a
Da, i više komentara. Po meni radionica nema smisla ako pri?e na dobiju kreativne komentare :? .
Može.

Da, više komentara...ja još nisam pročitao tvoju priču, ali budem. Kad si napisala roman :).

U svakom slučaju, apeliram na ljude da malo komentiraju... :alien:
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by Kris » 03 Jun 2004, 10:42

PRIJEDLOZI ZA NASLOV ZA LR br. 6.....
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You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.

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Unread post by Izitpajn » 03 Jun 2004, 15:50

Kris wrote:PRIJEDLOZI ZA NASLOV ZA LR br. 6.....
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Imam jedan na engleskom:

"Gravity of the situation", a u prici bi gravitacija odigrala bitnu ulogu...

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Unread post by Ire » 03 Jun 2004, 17:36

oš sudjelovat u radionici izitpajn? :toothy5:
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