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Kris
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Nimrod wrote:Prijedlozi za sada:

:arrow: Mjesto radnje: park u malom gradiću
Prva rečenica: "Od malih nogu privlačilo ju je to skrovito mjesto
na kraju staze."
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:arrow: Mjesto radnje: park u malom gradiću
Prva rečenica: "Nešto je šušnulo u grmlju iza starog hrasta,
pogledala je prema gore i počela se smijati."
Ime glavnog like: Morana


Ajde dajte jos danas prijedloge, ako ih ima. Ako nema, onda cemo nesto od ovoga. Sutra je dan odluke, pa da pocnemo s trecim krugom koji ce trajati 10 dana :)
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.
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Kris wrote:
:arrow: Mjesto radnje: park u malom gradiću
Prva rečenica: "Nešto je šušnulo u grmlju iza starog hrasta,
pogledala je prema gore i počela se smijati."
Ime glavnog like: Morana

Može ovo 8) , sviđa mi se ova rečenica
Život je samo san na putu do smrti
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L.Z. wrote:
Kris wrote:
:arrow: Mjesto radnje: park u malom gradiću
Prva rečenica: "Nešto je šušnulo u grmlju iza starog hrasta,
pogledala je prema gore i počela se smijati."
Ime glavnog like: Morana

Može ovo 8) , sviđa mi se ova rečenica
Ja se slažem! :D
Jel možemo onda krenut?
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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Idemo? :?:
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Idemo :?: :?: Kris kaži konačnu pa da počnemo :twisted:
Život je samo san na putu do smrti
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?ul sam da danas Kris nosi klapu (filmsku, ne dalmatinsku ili primorsku), i da ?e klapnuti jednom jako i dvaput slaba[?]no, i otpo?eti tre?u rundu. Mr. t xxxx pardon, Kris, molim te navedi kona?ne odrednice.
"Ojte gospon Kris
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Dajte klapu.
Odmah, da netko ne zatraĹži bis..."
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Dakle:


Mjesto radnje: park u malom gradiću
Prva rečenica: "Nešto je šušnulo u grmlju iza starog hrasta,
pogledala je prema gore i počela se smijati."
Ime glavnog like: Morana



Rok je sljedeca nedjelja, dakle 10 dana, plus minus jedan dan, odnosno pitanje je hocu li price staviti u nedjelju navecer ili u ponedjeljak ujutro na forum.

Krenimo! :D
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.
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Kako ide, društvo?
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU, dobro da si me sjetila. Moram počet pist :o :twisted:
Život je samo san na putu do smrti
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Može rok zaslanje do nedelju u ponoć, malo sam zaglavio na kraju, možda bude gotovo noćas a možda zaribam pa za svaki slučaj. Plizzz :?:
Život je samo san na putu do smrti
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Šta nećeš reći ni koliko je autora poslalo ni niš ovaj put, predizborna šutnja :?: :lol:
Život je samo san na putu do smrti
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Ĺ ta ne?e[?] re?i ni koliko je autora poslalo ni ni[?] ovaj put, predizborna [?]utnja
Hej ti si htio produĹženje roka do pono?i, pa se onda strpi malo. :wink:

Kris nadam se da sutra ?itamo pri?e :)
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Valjda :oops: šta ćeš kad sam nestrpljiv i plus toga tražim dulje rokove jer pišem u zadnji čas :twisted:
Život je samo san na putu do smrti
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Haha, stiglo je nekoliko priča, a i ja sam svoju završio u zadnji čas. Sutra ujutro ću staviti priče i ove iz 2. LR arhivirati.
You think of me as rats. You think of a thing known as The Air Force Survival Handbook, where it explains that if you cut off one of my heads --which is where the poison is -- you must then slit open the ventral side and continue the cuts to extend the length of each leg. Subsequent to this, the skin can be peeled off, the belly opened and emptied, the backbone split and both halves roasted on sharpened sticks over a small fire.
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