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Unread post by Nimrod » 03 Oct 2006, 10:53

LJUBAV

Ana i Mario ljubili su se strasno na debelom tepihu pored toplog kamina. Mario pomiluje Anine bradavice, pa joj posegne između nogu, osjeti vlagu, prodre prstom, primakne kukove. Ana se prepusti. Mario uvede ud u nju. Ovako spojenima, Ani je bilo lakše da svoj ud uvede u Marija. Marijo tada prodre trbušnim penisima u Anine trbušne vagine. Ana uzvrati. Ostale vagine na prsima, ramenima, glavi, otvoriše se i čudno spojiše sa odgovarajućim penisima. Ana i Mario se posve izgube u potpunom predavanju jedno drugome ...
Tri dana kasnije Anamario se probudi pored sad ugaslog kamina. Još nespretan, krene u kupaonicu.
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Unread post by Bahod » 04 Oct 2006, 16:05

malo previ??e pimpaÄ?a za moj ukus :lol:

nije mi ba?? jasno ??to je pisac htio reći :scratch:

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Unread post by Alien2dio » 04 Oct 2006, 18:29

Fora mi je!
Pretpostavljam da ti silni pimpaci i vagine otezavaju normalan zivot, jer ako si hodajuca genitalija tesko je naci vremena i interesa za bilo sto drugo osim za valjanje pred kaminom?
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Unread post by Izitpajn » 04 Oct 2006, 19:42

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Unread post by klaun van trenda » 04 Oct 2006, 20:54

puno neshvaćenih prič?a u LR13 pa tako i ova
sve ovo dajem generaciji u dešperaciji!
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Unread post by Indigo Montoya » 04 Oct 2006, 22:55

Uuuu... perverz mu??araf SF...
provokacijon plas porn plas loc of penisiz,
Podsjeća me na ono kad sam u "malo humora" plesnuo porno minijaturu "Trxmosis nije posve u??ivao u sno??aju" a Ire i Aranel vrisnule...

So... mi lajkit... :mrgreen:
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Unread post by Xaotix » 05 Oct 2006, 00:41

Netko ima pozamasnu kolekciju Hentaia doma :lol:
Sex sells, pogotovo kad sam sa sobom mozes napraviti grupnjak. Japanci bi kupili prava za ovo samo tako! :jerk:
No, ovako djeluje nekako klinicki. Ako si zelio napisati erotsku pricu ili pornografiju, mozda bi mogao upotrijebiti druge rijeci umjesto penisa i vagine. Bar je nas jezik plodan na tom polju!
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Unread post by niveska16 » 05 Oct 2006, 07:00

Za mene je ovo previ??e... :oops: :!: :shock: Uva??avam tebe i tvoju ideju,ali... :dontknow:

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Blockflote

Unread post by gost » 05 Oct 2006, 10:45

Meni je ovo dobro :) Lijepo sfiÄ?no, s lepom primjesom romantike, ak gleda?? metaforiÄ?ki. I sviđa mi se punchline ideja. Malo je bolesno sveukupno, though :?

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Unread post by mcn » 09 Oct 2006, 11:56

Odliccno.

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Unread post by Ire » 12 Oct 2006, 11:20

prebolesno :shock:

sviđa :D :mrgreen:
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